The screenshot function on my computer doesn't work, and I don't want to upload a huge file, but I would be happy to show it to you on Monday.
Violet gave me some really helpful suggestions about composition and color balance. She suggested I push some of the greens and reds into the central frame, which I agree with. It would also be an interesting way to show reflection. She liked the direction that I was taking it though, and I like it so far as well. I'm going to work on it as much as possible outside of class - if not this weekend then next. Anyway - her main comments were about the aforementioned color and the composition of the second frame in terms of color gradient.
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