What feedback did you receive from your partner?
My partners thought that my piece expressed movement well, and the wire was used well to represent the form.
how have you attended to line in 3d space? In what ways could you refine your use of line to capture the gesture? Consider where your figure is expressing movement, where your figure expresses stillness. Where do you see stillness and movement?
I have attended line in 3d space by bending it in all directions and trying to capture the essence and movement of the figure. I could refine my lines by simplifying the legs, as they can be confused with the torso. I think that my figure expresses stillness moreso then movement, and I think this stillness is captured by the simplicity of the wire.
How do you intend to proceed / finish your work? What needs to be addressed?
I intend to stain the wood on which my figure is seated, and I think this will make my sculpture more regal and peaceful, and in addition, simplify the legs.
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